So I just wanted to hear all of your opinions on the manga plot I've been working on for the past couple of months and new idead and criticism are welcome. Also in this universe there are three levels of space: Lower space, where the humans and aliens live (20 planets each with a population of 20 billion). Middle space, where the demi gods (24 planets with a population of 16 million each) and Higher Space, where the gods and supreme dieties live (8 small planets with a population of 1-3 each), this story takes place in middle space. (Picture is of teen main character)

200 years ago the universe suffered a great tragedy known as "The Great Massacre" after a race called "The Silvermen" went across the universe and started mercilessly destroying lives and planets along with them, none of the guardian dieties were able to stop them and it was soon starting to become the end of the universe as we know it. When suddenly. They disappeared. No one knew why they disappeared but no one bothered to care why, they were happy that they were safe and no longer needed to worry about them, until 11cyears ago, when a baby silverman was born on one of the planets, knowing that this would start chaos across the universe again, the elder residents of the planet decided to leave that baby out in the wild (I know they should have killed it but plot) and have the baby die there and that brings us to our main character, 11 year old Kai Kuru.

Kai Kuru (now a feral child, think of tarzan) was found by one of the local residents of the town (or so you think)who was going around the wilderness hunting Omite Hounds (That planets version of wolves). Kuru was defensive at first to go with this strange man but since he was Kuru was feral the man was able to bribe Kuru along with food, later on the strange man adopted Kuru as his very own son and didn't care if he was silverman as he was more open minded that the others, this didn't go well with the residents though as they contantly mocked him for "raising a monster treated Kuru like absolute trash but he just told Kuru to smile and keep walking, now Kuru is very hot headed (because of how he was treated) and doesn't follow what the man says often calling him stupid and saying he wouldn't hesistate to kill all the residents that man then tells him a story of how the most righteous and worthy people who protect and save lives can become full-fledged Gods who have their own kingdoms (in middle space) and rule over people, with a shined and enthusiastic look in his eyes Kuru makes it his mission to become a full fledged God.

Fast foward to current Kuru is now 12 years old and thinks he's ready to explore the universe and prove he can become a God however whn Kuru goes back to his house his house is burnt down and his father figure is gone missing, this enrages Kuru and he halts his mission to become a God and goes in search of his father figure, before he can do that however he is met with an enemy, a 14 year old white haired child soldier called "Snow" who is sent by the Lords (Part of the supreme dieties) to destroy planets that are not benefitting the Universe and the planet just so happens to be Kuru's. Kuru tries to fight snow but gets his ass handed to him and before Snow can destroy the planet a 12 year old called Amina stops him and tries to think of a compromise for Snow not to destroy the planet and it just so happens that Snow doesn't want to be part of any of this but he taken from his family (the lords take children of high-borns and make them super soldiers) and forced to become a soldier, he says if they can help him find his family he won't destroy the planet and will evn help Kuru. Also Amina isn't from that planet she's actually a runaway princess from another planet who couldn't take her life as princess anymore so took one of the armies space crafts and left. Amina also helps Kuru who says he doesn't need their help but they help anyway and that is the plot for the first arc. I know, long but thoughts? Also Kuru is a rare silverman called a Divine Child and these children are more powerful versions of silvermen with Gold eyes and face markings whereas normal silvermen have red eyes and no markings.